Pitch # 2

In these ten pages, the author mainly talked about the history of the Strorm’s family. Therefore, the story became quite mild and nothing really exciting. David’s grandfather, Elias, was the first person who settled down in Waknuk. He built a house and owned all the land there. This is the reason why David’s father, Joseph, can be that powerful in the district. Unfortunately, a group of foreign people, the Fringes, often attacked Waknuk. Waknuk was not peaceful anymore and the Waknuk citizens hated them. They called them the mutants. There was always a quote in their mind, “Watch thou for the mutants!” that made them kept away from those who had one more finger or one more toe. They were really anxious about them. These were the background information and it really helped to develop the story afterward.