Tuesday, October 16, 2007

Pitch # 7

Auntie Harriet found dead in the river near Waknuk, however, no one knew where her baby was, and no one mentioned anything about him. David got scared about his auntie’s death because he thought that was not her fault. In his opinion, being abnormal was not a big deal. There were nine children in Waknuk or lived near Waknuk who can communicate with their mind without talking face to face. A month ago, one of them suddenly stopped communicating with them and they were feared about if they were found out by anyone. Finally, Uncle Axel discovered that that guy was died in accident. One day, when David was working busily in the farm, his head felt really achy and he was liked pulled to run to the river bank. When he was arrived at the river bank, he saw her little sister, Petra. She is the newest children who can share her mind with others. David was surprised and amazed about that and he felt more relaxed because he was not the only one who had this ability in his family. The story was getting more and more anxious as there were more new characters and more people had special talent. The narrator was wondering who he could trust since the people relationship in Waknuk were too complicated. Also, he was needed to keep the secret of Petra and his weird ability. Furthermore, he didn’t get much help from others. It was a hard time for him and I think he would overcome it soon.

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