Pitch # 4

One day when David and Sophie were catching shrimp in the river, his classmate, Alan, came to visit him. In order to hide Sophie’s toes, David threw her shoes towards her immediately but one dropped into the water. Unfortunately, Alan saw a footmark with six toes on it: he realized that was Sophie’s footmark and she was a mutant. He ran to catch her: however, he failed because David stopped him by punching him hardly. They kept fighting and rolled down the hill. In urgent, Sophie hit Alan by a sharp rock and he fainted. Then they went to tell Mr. and Mrs. Wender, therefore, they left Waknuk as fast as they could. For sure, Alan ran to tell David’s father after he rose up. Then they called David back and asked him seriously, but David said nothing to them because he knew they would do something mean to the Wender’s family, perhaps murder. The worst thing finally happened, and I think the author was trying to create some suspense, so the story will go more and more interesting. Also, David is going to face some challenge that he might save the mutants.